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The wind

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At start it was a sweet breath,
a simple, gentle blow.

The breath then became a wind
that lightly caressed my cheeks.

Only then the tempest came
and dragged along my heart too.


Original:
Fu dapprima un alito dolce,
un semplice soffio gentile.

Il soffio si tramutò in vento
che lieve mi accarezzò il viso.

Tempesta arrivò solo dopo
e trascinò con sé il mio cuore.
This is what happens when the weather in London starts getting windy again...
English: 7 syllables verses
Original: 9 syllables verses
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NotenSMSK's avatar
Aha! I like how you went on with a simple description and the last two lines turned it into something special. Quite subtle for me. I like such play of words while using the simplest of expressions. Quite a nice work :huggle: