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I saw a star in the blackest night
And I reached for it, jumping high.
As jumps were not enough, I had to take flight
And venture in the dark, following the light.

Travelling in the dark was scary,
But the truth is that I never got weary.
Against all odds I fought with great bravery,
To reach for that star that was my fairy.

But when I thought that I could catch her,
Suddenly her light started to blur.
And as my hand reached for the last vanishing spark
There I was, left alone in the dark.
I'm writing a lot lately. Inspiration came back to me! YAY!
I know the themes are similar, but the thing is: there are so many ways to express even just one feeling that it always amazes me. So I try to express it in as many way as I can until it's gone.
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is a well written poem although I wonder if it was meant to be "nigh" in the first line.

The ending especially is good :)
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raen86 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
OMG Thank you so much for letting me notice the typo!
Now I'll go hide myself in shame...
Really glad you like it :)
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I am glad I could help you :) just change it ;) no need to hide before more people read it!
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